May/June Lite Entry - Through the Splotch Isles

[Lingon]

Thanks, Diamond and Bogie!

I think I'm done now actually, I had most of the labels in my head so writing them down didn't take too long. Maybe I'll do some tweaks if I have time, but otherwise this is the final version The labeling follows the journey and events during it, rather than locations, and begins at the ship in the lower left corner and continues along the path – hopefully this isn't too confusing

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[- Max -]

Look clear but the round dots don't really match the paint feel of the map imho.

[WillP]

Lingon,

Not to be a grammar Nazi, but #9 "Captain is deemed to drunk" should be Captain is deemed too drunk."

[Bogie]

Nice work, the story line is pretty funny.

[Lingon]

@-Max-
Thanks, I agree about the dots, they didn't turn out so great… Placing them all was pretty time consuming though and I don't really have time to redo it, plus they are actually painted and scanned so I don't know what to do to make them feel more painted… so I think I'll leave them as they are. Thanks for the comment!

@WillP
Doh! I always get that wrong. English isn't my first language, I guess I can always blame that Thanks for pointing it out, I've updated the map with the correction below.

@Bogie
Thank you!

And here's the probably final (again) version:
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[Diamond]

Turned out great! And I still love that octopus.

[Bogie]

Turned out great! And I still love that octopus.

The octopus is great, but the mermaid has boobs......

[Diamond]

Maybe the octopus does too...

[Lingon]

I just came up with the title for my first film: Mermaid vs Octopus.