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    Map Amelia's Grove

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    Finally, it is done! This is Amelia's Grove *dramatic music* No colors, but I hope to gain some skill in that area and post an updated version at some point. Enjoy

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    The overall layout is nice and I like the way you did the farms. Though in my humble opinion the city layout itself appears maybe too regular/repetitive. Adding some details (two sided roofs, chymneys, slight shadows on floor, walls/towers details and so) and labels could have make it more eyes-attractive and make it more "finished".

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    For my next map, how would you suggest I make the city layout more unique?

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    Don't get me wrong, the layout is nice, just a bit repetitive. Like I said, I'd add more details (especially if you don't color it) and make the blocks less regular to break the "pattern" effect.

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    Either way, thank you for the feedback

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    No problem, I hope it will help on your nexts maps. Keep the good job up

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