I thought I'd do another map including water to get my bearings stylewise. So I came up with this:

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I personally think this is my best effort so far. It includes prototypes of rivers and towns and roads.

Shoot away! There's still a lot to tweak, I know.

Edit: the road is still handdrawn, I forgot how to set curved paths to stroke. Can anyone help my poor old brain?