Nostapyrax

[fifty]

I've worked my way round the back of the 'posh' bit of the docks district and included my first public park area.



I've tried to give the impression of trees and shrubs on a grassed area - Originally they were drawn with a hard black edge, but although thin it just made them look like weird blobby buildings so I went for the 'raw' brush without edge - I think it looks OK ?



Now I'm onto the inner walled harbour - a naval district which includes a military shipyard and several large naval warehouses.

I'm really looking forward to finishing that then I can finally move out into the rest of the city!

[fifty]

Just got back from a week holiday in sunny Majorca so only managed to do the ridges and shading on the inner naval harbour, but this does mean the whole of the docks district is now (finally) finished!!


I'll be revisiting areas of the waterfront right at the end, when I'll possibly try to put in some ships and other feature things like my attempt at a little crane in the shipyard area.



One question for you chaps though.. I've tried to do two curved-slope rather than flat-slope roof warehouses but after staring at them for a while I'm not convinced they work...



thoughts?

[Meshon]

Maybe try removing the line across the center which suggests a sharp peak?

[J.Edward]

Meshon might be right about the center line.
I hope you can find time and willpower to get back to this fifty.
I know it can be daunting and taxing doing such a big city.
Hope you're doing well. Cheers.

[Topdecker]

I just wanted to thank you for sharing your progress - it is helpful to see all the design planning and in-progress decisions you've made. Your work is quite lovely - it will be nice to watch it progress.

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