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Thread: [Award Winner] Creation and Depiction of Fantasy Cities - Parts I & II

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    Yum, I'm going to have to get this! Thanks for all the kind comments, everyone!

    I've corrected those annoying spelling errors / incorrect usages that Midguard kindly pointed out and optimised the file size to 2.8 mb.

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    you get a five star ratinging from me rav! You have been repped as well!! I eagerly await the rest

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    Wow. I'd love to Rep, but it won't allow me. So, I'll just have to settle for rating the thread. Five stars from me as well. This is easily in the same quality leagues as the city design supplements around for purchase. Can't wait for part II.
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    Haven't read it closely, only skimmed it so far. But very nice work.

    So nice that I had to beat upon your skull with a reputation stick.
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    I've read it, and it was a good read.

    The only thing I'd say would to shorten some sentences. It is quite readable already, but some sentences could be better split into two or three sentences.

    I don't really have much to say about the content right now

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    It's been months since anyone posted here, it seems. I declare: this is AWESOME and I can't wait for part II. This is an absolutely brilliant work. I have to ask if you've ever read Italo Calvino's Invisible Cities - I think you'd find it interesting if you haven't.

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    Thanks Novarri! Part II is on my todo list, but I'm still in the process of working out what to put in Part II. I haven't read Invisible cities but I'm always on the lookout for books on urban design and planning, the subject fascinates me, so I'll definitely look it up. Thanks for the pointer!

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    Novarri isn't the only one waiting for the next piece of brilliance...
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    Perfect time for a bump - I'm city mapping at the moment. Looks great Ravs. Thanks for the good read. The art is well placed and breaks up the text nicely. Good job.

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