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    Default Finished map enjoy. Feed back always welcome.

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    The big magic storm in the middle was added per request of Patron

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    the storm looks like Saturn's NorthPole storm
    http://www.ciclops.org/view/7620/North-Polar-Movie

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    Cool map. Nice colors. The north-south passage is an interesting feature.

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    Yes I think it looks great. I think the national boundaries might be clearer in yellow or red, possibly dashed.

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    Very nice work with great colors! I second Larb about boundaries and would probably use a "less button" style for the cities. I really like the general land shape.

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    Nice job on this Daniel! The colors are very vibrant. One recommendation would be to tone down the contrast on the texture of your background parchment layer; it's a little bit busy. Also, borderlines might help to embellish the map a bit. Nice work though.

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    -Arsheesh

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    That world cyclone looks terrifying Great first map, you have alot of talent! I also second Arsheesh's comment!

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    A good map, in my opinion, but when I first saw it I mistook the national boundaries for rivers and was going to call the river police. So I agree with Larb's comment.
    If you didn't purposely choose an oil painting style for you map, you should also follow Arsheesh's good advice.

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