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    Wip Verdugo Island

    Thanks to the Community Challenge, I wanted to go further in my tests with Wilbur (thanks again for this incredible software Waldonrate!).

    So, here's a test with a different method. I'm not sure about the water/coasts, and, well... still experimenting and having fun.
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    All comments & critics very welcome!

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    Wow! That looks gorgeous, love the colors. The coasts could perhaps use a darker and maybe slightly thicker line, and I think I'd like to see a few more rivers, with all those valleys. This will be interesting to follow

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    The paper fold that rund in the middle of the page disturbs me a little bit. The map has a modern look with the terrace style and the fold breaks it.

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    Wow, that's really cool, how you did the topo, love how subtle it is, and how it is shown in the water shallows, looking forward seeing this develop,

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    Looks very cool Ilanthar.
    Sort of agree with Antonio.
    But you keep doing your thing sir. You have a skill for bringing it all together.

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    Off to a good start here Ilanthar, looks promising!

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    That's very attractive. Definitely a style worth perusing.

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    Hey, that was fast! Thanks a lot guys!

    @Lingon : I fully agree it needs more rivers. I'm not fully happy with them and I'll try to improve them. I'm gonna do a test for the coastline.

    @Antonio & J.Edward : I agree and I'm gonna remove it.

    @Snodsy : good to know, I wasn't sure to keep the underwater topo.

    I'm really happy wit this base test. I'm gonna try to improve it and maybe I'll do a second version of Janantara Elubor in this style.
    Thanks for the useflul comments!

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    A pretty nice looking start you got there Ilanthar. The colours are already looking gorgeous!

    I'm not sure about thicker lines for the coasts, I kind of love how subtle it is at the moment.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ilanthar View Post
    I'm really happy wit this base test. I'm gonna try to improve it and maybe I'll do a second version of Janantara Elubor in this style.
    Thanks for the useflul comments!
    That should be very cool to see Ilanthar.
    I look forward to seeing that one for sure.

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