I really like this map, its straight forward and has a simplicity to it that really works. You gave me some ideas about a Town (Loudwater) from the 4e FR setting... I was tryuing to decide on how to wanted to redraw it and what style I would use. I think your style in this map is something I can easily replicate. The main element of this map which I like is the use of vibrant solid colors with 'sketchy' hatching where needed... its not realistic, but that works for this map.