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Thread: April Entry: [Region 1][Map 29][Kaiar]

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    Very cool, although I agree it could be a bit lighter.
    This is going to be a hard challenge to vote in. Lots of cool maps.
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    Ditto on the darkness - just a bit of lightening will help immensely. This turned out quite nicely.

    Does a ship have to be wrecked? You add could one or two and just have them partially submerged under the water or something - just an idea.
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    Lightened a bit, and tried adding a sunken ship, not sure if I like the ship or not.
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    From what I could see it looked OK, but it was so small it's difficult to tell.

    Maybe a zoomed-in view of the area with the ship would help with some C&C.
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    Maybe you could also add a sunken ship a bit farther into the water (not too far). It could have been a ship caught on fire while fleeing.
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    Well, I'm still in the "Too Dark" camp, but if I'm alone in that then use your judgement. I think this is a great map with a really good shot at taking the competition this month. I couldn't find the sunken ship, unless it's right next to the docks. If so, I'd echo Gandwarf's advice.
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    Moved the ship further out, also used one of my larger versions of it.
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    I am digging it. You might even add another wreck somewhere. But don't overdo it
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