Railroads of Tordryon

[Jharviss]

Hello friends!

I just threw this map together and I thought I'd come by and see if I could get some feedback. The map's probably a little all over the place, but I've done some things with it I've never done.

It's in a steampunk setting warped to my liking, and I wanted to make that more than obvious with the map. It's meant to portray the available rails throughout the nation, as my up-and-coming campaign will feature the players stuck on a train.

Let me know what you think. There are a lot of things I'm iffy on, but if I could get some feedback, I'd be quite happy.

I would also like to know how y'all think I could do rivers in this style. Obviously my choice of water representation is a little weird, but I can't seem to find a good way to do rivers. Thoughts?

Thanks,
Daniel from the Burrow