Page 2 of 5 FirstFirst 12345 LastLast
Results 11 to 20 of 46

Thread: Grackslu WIP

  1. #11
    Guild Apprentice
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Poland, Poznań
    Posts
    39

    Post

    The circular river has a 30% finished story, thought it would be interesting to have a high speed water perpetum-mobile (think of the possibilities!)
    The sun for rivers was the same as for the mountains, although I have no idea why there was "emboss" instead of "inner bevel"
    The square thing... not as easy as it might have seen, but manageable
    The ocean had a change right after I uploaded the last one (the dark part seemed to sharp)
    so, with this quick update comes a hard question:
    where do forests grow?

    Click image for larger version. 

Name:	grackslu3.jpg 
Views:	69 
Size:	4.50 MB 
ID:	17525
    Last edited by Spiritless; 10-08-2009 at 06:18 PM.

  2. #12
    Guild Apprentice
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Poland, Poznań
    Posts
    39

    Wip

    Well... Moving forward. Finished forests, borders, cities (goddamn making one brush 10 times to fit in those pixels), the net, will have to search for a method for roads, and then the naming process and finishing it. Oh and the scale is one square is about 50 miles

    Any thoughts?




    Click image for larger version. 

Name:	grackslu.jpg 
Views:	89 
Size:	4.40 MB 
ID:	17666

  3. #13
    Community Leader Facebook Connected Ascension's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Location
    St. Charles, Missouri, United States
    Posts
    8,392

    Post

    In the middle of the map, just right of center, it looks like you filled in some lakes or something and that's producing a hard edge. You also might want to add a black stroke around your towns so that they don't get lost in the lighter colored areas. So far so good.
    If the radiance of a thousand suns was to burst at once into the sky, that would be like the splendor of the Mighty One...I am become Death, the Shatterer of worlds.
    -J. Robert Oppenheimer (father of the atom bomb) alluding to The Bhagavad Gita (Chapter 11, Verse 32)


    My Maps ~ My Brushes ~ My Tutorials ~ My Challenge Maps

  4. #14
    Guild Artisan Juggernaut1981's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2009
    Location
    Sydney Australia
    Posts
    677

    Post

    Just noticed... suppose it isn't deliberate... but your rivers look like they are "blue lines of putty glued onto the landscape".
    "Sacrificing minions... is there any problem it cannot solve?" - Order of the Stick


    Some of the books I have written, or am still writing...
    My Lulu Store

  5. #15
    Community Leader Facebook Connected Steel General's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Location
    Ft. Wayne, IN
    Posts
    9,530

    Default

    Looking good, couple of things I noticed...

    1) You have some pixelization/noise around many of your lakes
    2) As Juggy pointed out your rivers look like they rise up off the land. Not sure if that's do to the source of the lighting or not.
    My Finished Maps | My Challenge Maps | Still poking around occasionally...

    Unless otherwise stated by me in the post, all work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial 3.0 United States License.



  6. #16
    Guild Artisan LonewandererD's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2009
    Location
    Australia, AUSSIE AUSSIE AUSSIE!
    Posts
    814

    Post

    Hey, I know other people have mentioned the rivers already but I had the same problem with mine. Here's the setting i used, maybe they'll work for your rivers too.

    Set the fill to 0%.
    Colour overlay of 110,160,200 at 50% opacity.
    Bevel and emboss at chisel soft and direction down. Set the highlight of the bevel to 0 and size to 1.

    Essentially the same as the rivers in Ascension's tut but with some slight tweaking, if the rivers turn out to bright, or not bright enough, just tweak the opacity on the colour overlay. The bevel doesn't really work if the rivers are 1 pixel wide but that shouldn't be a problem with your map. Where the rivers meet the sea, or a lake, lightly erase the edges with a small airbrush eraser to make them fade into the water.

    Hopes this helps.

    -D-
    Last edited by LonewandererD; 10-14-2009 at 07:24 AM. Reason: spelling errors
    People come and people go. I walk amongst them, I see their faces; but none see mine. I pass them in the streets but nary a glance is spared my way, for what interest would they have in a Wanderer? Not of this world... Forever Alone... Forever Wandering... LoneWandererD...

    My DeviantART

    Finished Maps

    RIP Angel "Ingy" Yates - The first inspiration that guided me towards art. You will be missed...

  7. #17
    Community Leader Facebook Connected Ascension's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2008
    Location
    St. Charles, Missouri, United States
    Posts
    8,392

    Post

    The problem with the rivers is an inner bevel instead of an outer bevel.
    If the radiance of a thousand suns was to burst at once into the sky, that would be like the splendor of the Mighty One...I am become Death, the Shatterer of worlds.
    -J. Robert Oppenheimer (father of the atom bomb) alluding to The Bhagavad Gita (Chapter 11, Verse 32)


    My Maps ~ My Brushes ~ My Tutorials ~ My Challenge Maps

  8. #18
    Guild Apprentice
    Join Date
    Oct 2009
    Location
    Poland, Poznań
    Posts
    39

    Wip

    Ok.
    I tried to fix the lakes and the shores, somewhat worked (I hope), and I've fixed the rivers. Now I'm working on roads, then I'll try naming all that stuff... And then what?

    Click image for larger version. 

Name:	grackslunext.jpg 
Views:	96 
Size:	4.23 MB 
ID:	17694

  9. #19
    Guild Artisan su_liam's Avatar
    Join Date
    Aug 2007
    Location
    Port Alberta, Regina(IRL: Eugene, OR)
    Posts
    798

    Default

    There's a rather interesting crop-circle in the southeastern forest. I assume that's intentional? Ancient elven ceremonial site, perhaps?

  10. #20
    Guild Artisan Facebook Connected
    Join Date
    May 2008
    Location
    Atlanta, Georgia, United States
    Posts
    928

    Post

    At this scale (or what I presume this scale to be), that's a heck of a ceremonial site! I'd figure it to be the ruins of an ancient super-city.
    I think, therefore I am a nerd.
    Cogito, ergo sum nerdem.

    Check out my blog: "The Undiscovered Author"
    It's the story of a writer... follow me in my simple quest to get published, and share your own writing stories, adventures and writerly tips.

    Pimping my worldmap here. Still WIP... long way to go, but I'm pretty proud of what I've done so far...

Page 2 of 5 FirstFirst 12345 LastLast

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •