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    My first town-town-feycaster.jpg

    this is my first town, it's not yet finished, i need to add a legend and compass rose and clean it up a little bit, I'm hoping to sharpen the image, and maybe some color. but here it is for critique before i do any of that

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    Hew brew, not bad! A suggestion: All your houses are oriented exactly north south or east west. If you align them to the roads they face it will begin to look much better.

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    Very nice. I agree with ravells that the houses should face the road, but other then that it looks like a very promising start.

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    Yup...a great start. Town/City maps can be a bit daunting.
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    looks good - some light coloring would be a nice touch
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