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    Post Chandelyre, a Hamlet scared by undead worms

    Well, another map. It shows a small hamlet wich falled under the cult of Kyuss, the Overlord of all the evil worms.

    Since that time a curtain of fog shades the surounding lands.

    Viewing back, I ask myself if the ground have to be textured.

    Would you dare to stay only but a night ? Beware the crreping doom and the groaning of the evil overlord's wicked sons
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    looks good so far.

    I do have a comment though...It seems to me that the fog is not any higher than the eaves of the houses and tree tops. This is because they stand out more. The hill to the left (I am making an assumption here though) is also enshrouded in the fog. I think the fog might be more believable if the hill was also clear of it, and the fog had a bit of texture or noise to give the appearance of thick or thinner patches throughout the map.
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