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    What an absolute beauty. Gorgeous map, Woekan!

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    Thanks for the compliments! My face is red

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    Quote Originally Posted by woekan View Post
    @Korash, I dont understand What do i do with my rivers?
    Sorry for taking so long to get back to this...

    What I was saying about the rivers and lakes is that the river coming into the map from the north west splits almost 90 degrees and both branches head to a lake. Both lakes then drain into the water. Just looks so wrong to me. The river from the west has a weird curve to it as well. I would have joined it to the river before the north/south road, because it looks to be going through high ground to double back a bit. Or maybe have it join the sea by itself instead.

    Like I said before, this is a very nice looking map, and these are my only critiques on it.

    Repped (if I can)

    :edit: need to spread more love :/edit:
    Last edited by Korash; 02-06-2009 at 02:09 PM. Reason: DOH!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by woekan View Post
    Thanks for the compliments! My face is red
    Check out my City Designer 3 tutorials. See my fantasy (city) maps in this thread.

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    @Gandwarf - Someone in your family sell skin care products?
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    Awesome Map!

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    Wow... You started out with a nice map, Woekan, but WOW (did I say that already?) did you improve a lot and fast! I'm standing over there in the texture-lovin' line. The trees and the water are beautiful, and the wakes behind the boats are styyyylin'! I like the buildings, the fields, the trees, the water, the borders -- the roads seem to be a little on the wide side in relation to the houses (unless there's a turn lane, maybe? ) and especially the further away one gets from the city, and the rivers -- yeah -- they have some reality issues. Redrobes has a most excellent tutorial on the subject here: How to get your rivers in the right place. Maybe that will help!?

    I'm really looking forward to seeing more of your work. Verra nice stuff!
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