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    Wip Harbor WIP

    Hello Cartographers

    Taking my inspiration from Coyotemax's Cruzamento De Rio map and following Ascention's marvelous photoshop town tutorial I though I would try a harbor city map I have been toying with. I still tring different textures and colors and just wanted some constructive criticism and feedback. Thanks.
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    Well first off, to be a city you might want to add some more buildings...

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    Seriously, looking like a very good start - nice job on the structures. The water looks a little uniform at this point, but i imagine you'll have a few things to say along those lines soon. I know I got tired of things now and then and skipped around to come back later.

    I look forward to watching this one take form

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    It's a good start. Will hold off any further C&C until you get a bit more done
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    Wip

    I would like to show the progression of my harbor. I have added the city walls and the main roads. Let me know what you think.
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    Looks very nice so far. I love that style
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    This reminds me a bit of a fortified city like in the Netherlands. Cities like Amsterdam, Willemstad, Brielle. I´d like to see one on this board once.

    Very nice map though!

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    Great start! Looking forward to seeing more

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    Looks good

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    Found some time to start adding the city to my harbor. Please let me know what you think and thanks for the kind words.
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    That looks nice. I like the effect.
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