I REALLY LIKE IT. I can't really see anything wrong that catches my eye now so YAY. I do like how the text at the corner makes this map somewhat more eerie. I've been trying to think of any criticism to help you with but I can't come up with anything so... yeah. Good job so far! I also like how you've upped the saturation from your last post. The map looks prettier with brighter colours now ^__^