I'm loving it. It's got a good look to it. I think I'd prefer to see the title off to the side. I love the geography you have going and wouldn't want a title covering any of it up! What about following one of your original designs and offsetting the map from the center of the page and using an enlarged left/right margin? Also, if you don't mind me asking, how did you make the paper? I've tried a few different methods, but I haven't found a tutorial I really love yet on the basics. I love the fold lines, but most paper tutorials I found are usually only two-toned and the fibers/colors/little alterations in shape and color just don't ever seem to mesh right.