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    Had another look at it and I think it warrants some feedback as I do really like it.

    Firstly I'd lose the grain texture on the wood as I think it it doesn't suit the style (you're drawing style actually remind me of my own illustrations; line work, block colour, single highlight and low light). If you want detail then draw it in the hard way.

    Secondly I'd try more variation with the line width on your next piece. A thinner line for the detail would really give the pic a lot more punch eg. mountain and tree detail). Some coastal cliffs on your southern landmass would also be pretty nice given the 3D view (similar to your southern most mountain plateau range) as otherwise it looks like 3d drawings drawn on top of an overhead flat landmass.

    But yeh, pretty great
    Last edited by Cunning Cartographer; 02-03-2014 at 11:15 AM.

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