Black Sails Bay

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I like them even better now

Just caught my eye - a tiny fleck of the speckled inner ring on those two city symbols seems to have escaped the inner boundary of the circle in the south-east segment - same on both symbols.

Other than that - perfect

Are you going to colour the sails of the other tribes? Maybe put a hawk design on the clan de hawk one, and something on the other two?

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I like them even better now

Just caught my eye - a tiny fleck of the speckled inner ring on those two city symbols seems to have escaped the inner boundary of the circle in the south-east segment - same on both symbols.

Other than that - perfect

Are you going to colour the sails of the other tribes? Maybe put a hawk design on the clan de hawk one, and something on the other two?

That was corrected yesterday, after the upload... Thanks for your eye !

The other sails will be decorated, as well as some boats will be redrawn, to add diversity
I stil have another piece of paper to draw on the right of the map, to tell the story of the area, add names of cities and regions, draw a glacier, add some yellow to the whole map, make a compass... this never ends...