JonPin, thanks for the link. I've actually seen that already. The issue is that that guy is an incredibly talented artist and I'm ... not! (But thanks for trying to help!)

Abu, thanks for your comment! You know how it is when you aren't quite happy with something, though. It niggles!

And about that ...

I can't leave things alone and I decided to have another poke about. Does it work any better without any line art at all, and just shading? (I banged this out in about 15 mins, so it's not the greatest job.) I guess I want to know if I'm beating a dead horse and should just leave it as it is, or should I try to go with just shading (which I can tidy up and colour a bit).

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