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Thread: The Siege of Jadotville (as seen on Netflix)

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    I think this is about done. I added in a inset map, more trees and more text.

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    I like it. This is a great looking map!

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    Nice job on this timallen. Good information and really like the inset map. I think the arrows and white oval could be a little more delicate?, seems a little harse and over powering. Look forward to seeing this in the challage.

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    You think so? Hmmm...I could try the circle/arrows with more tan and less white, perhaps.

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    Yup, I second Snodsy's advice. For the rest, a very nice map, and the mini-map is working well .

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    here is the map with toned down circle/arrow thingy. This is definitely not in the same class as the other entries, but it does the job I set out for it- to tell the story of the siege of Jadotville. Its even got the attention of a game designer friend of mine who had never heard of the battle and who now says he wants to make a game of it, which is kinda kool.

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    Quote Originally Posted by timallen View Post
    This is definitely not in the same class as the other entries...
    You play yourself down too much Timallen. This is a subtly beautiful map with a bundle of information displayed very clearly. I wouldn't say it was any better or worse than anyone else's but simply different

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