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Thread: August/September 2017 Challenge: Planets of hats

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    Really nice story ! I love the large size of the illustration for reading the whole story ! And it's a real performance to achieve all the challenge in one !

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    The last line of text contains two errors. It should read "You're safe now, nothing else matters..." Also, the line before that really shouldn't have a comma.

    Cool concept.

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    Quote Originally Posted by rdanhenry View Post
    The last line of text contains two errors. It should read "You're safe now, nothing else matters..." Also, the line before that really shouldn't have a comma.

    Cool concept.
    Indeed, I was not instructing the character to check his safe to see if the GOLD had been robbed.
    Thanks for pointing that out.

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    Really well done, Azelor. An excellent concept

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