It's looking good.
But I find the black dots for the cities a bit too strong and especially the black and red for Riverhewn is a bit annoying for me.Maybe you could lower down the opacity, change the colors or design some hand-drawn symbols(but those I'm not sure if they would go well with this map) but this is just my personal preference.

Edit: Well actually the black dots are not that bad it's Riverhewn that I don't like.
Edit: But they could use fixing.