First of all - Hello fellow cartographers !
I just registered so that I can share with You some artwork that I created.

I want to create full size big scale city map, but before i jump in deep water I have created this sample and I just wanted to ask Your opinion if this looks ok, good, so so etc.
Mostly I am interested in things like : scale , colors / saturation, contrast / brightness, shading.

One picture is with frame and clouds - secound without - decide which is better.

Let me know if You have any remarks :)
I obviously look for some constructive critisim, but remarks such as "it sucks" or "it doesnt suck" are also welcome :D (from me, maybe not from board admins :D )

Thanks a lot in advance ;)

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