Hello,

Thanks you for your advices ! specially "Ascension" for all details !


I will try to change everything like everyone said. However the fact that there is a big chain of mountain, "weird chain of mountain" is a little bit normal ^^; because it's normally not a normal chain of mountain in this world .

The mountains in the middle and bottom are in a weird place, they cut across and island instead of running the length of the island plus most of the others are right on the coast. Move them inland so that they form a "backbone" for the rest of the land to cling to. It is okay to have some near the coast, though.
Could you explain me how doing that because, for me I don't see any problem

For the tree, I confess that I used some of them from a collection of brush because I don't find what I want ( and I'm really bad at drawing ^^''''')

For the rivers, how I can make them going out the lake and go to the sea ? Do I make the line bigger ?

For the town, Thanks I don't think about that before .

Thank you everyone for your help, I will correct and post the new version ask for your advice again .


NB: sorry for my bad english :s It's not my mother tongue