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    Wip Hand-drawn WIP: Braid

    I'm starting a quick little project: a village centered in and around a braided river. I'm doing this by hand with pens, and will color it in pencil.

    On the actual piece, so far I have nothing but a border and a title!
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    ...but I will also share my initial attempt to scratch this out, which should give some idea of the style I'm going for. (You can see that I already changed the name.)
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    The idea is to have some more cartoony representations of forests, buildings, bridges, etc all around and in the braided river bed, right near where the river flows out into a larger body of water. That sketch river bed is, I think, too symmetric, so I'll be paying close attention to aerial photos of braided rivers. (Some of the best references for what I want, so far, seem to be the Platte River in Nebraska.) I will probably also plop a small delta at the outflow.

    Clearly, I am also studying how to draw cartoony buildings on pylons. I was trying to play with a very oblique angle and exaggerate the perspective, as well as doing some attempts to make the roof more bowed, but I think that was probably biting off more than I should have. The uppermost building seems like the best idea so far.

    I'm also trying new forest styles; in particular, I am doing something that I think will allow me to differentiate deeper forests and jungles by adding under- and over-growth.

    Finally, I promise to post more! Really!

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    I always seem to like your work jshoer! You always seem to try new things and experiment, which I want to do more (though to be fair I've only just started).

    I definitely agree with you about the nailing that perspective because looking at the moment, it seems a little varying which certainly gives it an interesting style (though as you say, this is just experimentation). It's good you've chosen a house you like to work from and I look forward to seeing this develop as with all your pieces!

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    I do like experimenting! My feeling is that the more I can add to my repertoire, the more I can draw from later.

    I think maybe perspective is going to be a challenge here. I'm thinking about whether I should add more perspective to the forest to fit better with the buildings, or tone down the perspective on the latter. I'm going to keep playing with ideas.

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    Yeah, keep it fluid for now and see where it takes you!
    Experimenting is always great fun and totally agree about adding to your skills and repertoire!

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    Here's where my experiments are going now:
    1. I've reworked the forest a little (especially the treetops, but also to make the contours of the canopy match up with where I placed the trunks).
    2. I have basically abandoned the idea of exaggerated perspective on buildings. That was just too much at once, and it didn't match up with the forest. Still working a bit on their style.
    3. I tried building up the river in a new way: instead of drawing a wide, meandering river and putting islands in it to create the braid, I took a pencil and interwove three or four meandering river courses, then filled in all the outlines with my pen. I like this much better. I may need to tweak some island shapes, but I think this comes pretty close to what I want. What do you think?
    4. I am playing with hatching to give depth to the braid islands. I tried three different styles on this river (bottom: small, quick hatching; center: regularly spaced, wide hatching; top: hatching on the far side of the islands). I think I like the middle one best...thoughts?

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    Here is the final river form. The little rectangles are planks laid across as small bridges. Breaks in the line indicate where full-sized bridges will appear.
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    This is looking really cool! My initial thought after a half second glance was 'celtic knot' so you've definitely pulled off the 'braid' aspect. Looking forward to seeing you fill out the other areas.
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    Sorry jshoer I missed your update. I think you've definitely made a great choice with your river, making it unique, pretty and also living up to the title.

    I agree that that with the buildings it would be hard to make it fit in with a forest of that style, but hey that's what experimenting is for. Look forwards to seeing more of this! I also agree on the centre shading choice for the islands, though the bottom one with the quick strokes is also nice.

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    Thanks for the comments - right now I am thinking of going with the usual isometric view of the buildings; that should be okay with the forest style.

    ChickPea, I'm glad your thought went in the direction I was trying to suggest! How do you think the river looks realism-wise?

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    The one in your experiments looks more realistic at the moment, but that's in part because you've got the island shading and the final one has bridge gaps. I assume the river shape you were after in your final one is where an oxbow lake is starting to form. Either way, I think it finds itself inbetween realism and stylistic at a place where it happily balances both at the same time.

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