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    Map Tal Dorei map

    Hi fellash!

    Just wanted to show you my taldorei map! I could use some C&C!

    https://www.patreon.com/posts/tal-dorei-free-16528762

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    Hello fellah!

    I dig your map. The colors are simple, but clean, elements like mountains, forests and rivers are clearly readable, and the overall composition is nice, though I guess that's more to Matthew Mercer's credit.
    I personally could do without the hexagon grid, but if it's a requisite for gameplay, then fine. Maybe make both versions available?

    You could also experiment with a texture overlay, to set off the detail even more? Something not too grungy, but just to add a bit of depth. Just a suggestion.

    I will say, though, you need to go through the labels and make sure your spelling and punctuation are correct. I've looked at the map for only a minute and seen quite a few mistakes already:
    'Westrun' is spelled 'Westruun'
    'Fort daxio' should be 'Fort Daxio'
    'Emrald Post' is 'Emerald Outpost'
    'Dagerbay Mountains' is 'Daggerbay Mountains'
    'Feshun Narows' is 'Feshun Narrows'

    and there might be others I haven't caught.
    I'd also reduce the stroke around some of the labels, they seem a bit too "fat" for my taste.

    But overall, nice effort, and a great take on the awesome universe of Critical Role!
    Last edited by Daelin; 03-01-2018 at 05:58 AM.

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    Great Suggestions!

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