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    Okay, I have made a few changes, and tried to do a bit more finishing on it. Here's take 2. (Already spotted a few areas where some of the layers bled over, so I'll snag those!)

    Things I tried to change:

    1 - Ditched the walls over the water. Wasn't necessary
    2 - Added a little definition to the ground and water
    3 - Reduced scale to lessen scribbles
    4 - Adjusted the island piece to be more of an outpost than a full castle

    I'd love to hear any other feedback!

    Next step: Adjusting colors for snow.

    Stonerang_Take2.png

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    Yep, that's looking very pre-winter--scraped out and dead.

    I also like the new layout!
    Moonflowers is about an Irish guy, an American girl who ends up living with him, and the dog they rescue. Who is secretly the girl's presumed-dead father.

    ...Yeah, it's that kind of story.

    And by story, I mean "fairy-tale."

    And by fairy-tale, I mean "the unsettling kind."

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    Thanks!

    I've added some snow to the plains and hills, and tried washing out the colors of the town a little bit.

    Next, I'll try to make some progress on the water, and fix that bottom right island (Not sure why he's a little screwy).

    Stonerang_Take2_Snow.png

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