Thank you for the comments.

I have tried a quick redo with wider spaced mountains, a smaller edge and a greater range of mountain sizes:

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Not so overpowering now but the scale looks a bit off to me so the next attempt will be to create a more defined ridge system, as for the shading i hope inspiration will strike

Korba