Broca Campaign Map (first Map)

[arsheesh]

I have to agree with what others have already said. The colors, layout and coastline of the map are very nice, but the stroke size of the coastline is a bit overwhelming. Unless for some reason you cannot alter it (e.g. either it just is your outline and you don't have another one), I would recommend reducing the size of the outline. Also, the tree icons are a bit hard to make out. You might want to find some that are more clear. Otherwise, not bad.

Cheers,
-Arsheesh

[Seraphine_Harmonium]

Also, the tree icons are a bit hard to make out. You might want to find some that are more clear.

As an alternative, making them bigger might work just as well. With icons like that, they probably are not to scale anyway, so I think it might be a net improvement.