Saelestria, Any feedback?

[rdanhenry]

I like the forests. The sea seems a bit flat compared to the land. With that must texture on the land, I'd texture the sea as well. The mountains feel a bit unnatural to me. Maybe add some irregularity so that the ridge line of the main range doesn't form such a smooth arc. Your river system is... unnatural. See http://www.cartographersguild.com/sh...he-right-place for the basic law on rivers.

[everydayj]

I like the forests. The sea seems a bit flat compared to the land. With that must texture on the land, I'd texture the sea as well. The mountains feel a bit unnatural to me. Maybe add some irregularity so that the ridge line of the main range doesn't form such a smooth arc. Your river system is... unnatural. See http://www.cartographersguild.com/sh...he-right-place for the basic law on rivers.

I definitely agree that the sea appears to be really flat. I"m hopefully going to have time to work on that part tonight. I also agree with the mountain ridges. I wanted it to have more separated peaks, but it seems to have developed a spine which I'm not overly fond of. Agree on the rivers, as well, and I think I meant to change that awhile back after reading that article, but absolutely forgot to. Thanks for the input and providing the great link again.