A map for a novel

[rdanhenry]

Yes, it has river violations. The original post stated this was a non-realistic dreamland map.

This world is located into dreams so it's normal if there are some "strange" elements. For exemple, there are roads under water, a city under water (Abyssa), a strong water stream, and rivers are means of communication (like trains), etc...

So, the rivers are fine.

[adunakhor]

Concerning the rivers, rdanhenry is right : that's an example of "strangenesses" found in this world because it's a dreamland. The city divided into two parts (black and red) also.

For the fonts, we like this one so we won't change. Now, effectively it was difficult to read the labels so I darkened them in order to be more visible.

I'd also softened the edge where ocean meets land but I'm not sure I want to keep this "edge". I wonder if the first map (without this edge effect) isn't better?

And thanks for the few comments and advices.