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[ravells]

Or better still upload the picture directly to this site. Press the 'go advanced' button and then the 'manage attachments' button.

[NeonKnight]

Nice map, few critiques:

Some of your 'dots' for cities lie beneath the roads, can you put them above the roads?

City Names, when I place them in my maps I try my utmost to not have them placed over other map features, in this case the roads or coast. It breaks it up on the eyes, and would look cleaner otherwise.

Otherwise, good map.

[Xenmas]

Nice map, few critiques:

Some of your 'dots' for cities lie beneath the roads, can you put them above the roads?

City Names, when I place them in my maps I try my utmost to not have them placed over other map features, in this case the roads or coast. It breaks it up on the eyes, and would look cleaner otherwise.

Otherwise, good map.

Good advise. This map, unfortunately, is from a game that I am no longer running. I will take those points into account with my maps for the three games that I am still working on. I'm trying to get away from using dots as a whole for cities anymore, which should solve the road problem. I want to try and make the cities look more like cities.

My scale was way out of wack on this map as well. I am learning to keep things in a much smaller scale and build around them. Yet still, my temple that I'm working on spans three football fields....Yeesh