This style has come together very nicely. I like the black lines and restrained colouring. A couple of the borders are a little rough - missing the coastlines or overlapping in places - which doesn't quite fit with the clean lines in the rest of the piece. Also, the town symbols are obviously resized for diffferent locations. That might be better done with a different icon for a smaller settlement. Other than that - great map. I really like the cartouche as well - that's just lovely.