Cool! gotta love the anchient evil god..it might be a bit too "literal" it's a good explanation but maybe lacking in "mood" maybe something like: "In the endless night of *insert plane here* The dark god *insert name here* plots his return to the light above. Who will be brave enough to thrwart his evil plans. It will be an adventure containing much danger and spanning realms..." I like to write so I can be accused of being overly dramatic..