The Kingdom Of Shendenflar

[Avengeil]

It's looking good.
But I find the black dots for the cities a bit too strong and especially the black and red for Riverhewn is a bit annoying for me.Maybe you could lower down the opacity, change the colors or design some hand-drawn symbols(but those I'm not sure if they would go well with this map) but this is just my personal preference.

Edit: Well actually the black dots are not that bad it's Riverhewn that I don't like.
Edit: But they could use fixing.

[jtougas]

It's looking good.
But I find the black dots for the cities a bit too strong and especially the black and red for Riverhewn is a bit annoying for me.Maybe you could lower down the opacity, change the colors or design some hand-drawn symbols(but those I'm not sure if they would go well with this map) but this is just my personal preference.

Edit: Well actually the black dots are not that bad it's Riverhewn that I don't like.
Edit: But they could use fixing.

Good point..that black and red doesn't fit at all sometimes you have to have other people notice things before you do.. thanks I'm going to see if I can whip up some custom symbols or maybe find some cool ones somewhere..