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    I have to disagree, I think the old grasscolour looked a better, maybe it's more realistic this way, but.. I still like the old one better, maybe something in between?

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    Look like some of the buildings along the 'southern' wall have lost some of their details.
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    Default 'touche time

    City Update. Started on the cartouche. Is this too boring? Or does it suit? . Comments welcome before I dig myself too deep.
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    I am jealous.. looks great a couple of little tweaks here and there and it will be perfect..
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    Looks cool! I can't identify the building next to the castle in the NW. Looks like a carousel

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    Quote Originally Posted by Katto View Post
    Looks cool! I can't identify the building next to the castle in the NW. Looks like a carousel
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    I have now completed the colouring. Nit-picking encouraged
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    I'm really liking the variety of rooftops here. To be nit picky, the jetties look too similar to me, same shapes and colours.
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    I like it very much! Have you tried to add a bit of depth to the coast or perhaps a soft brownish stroke here and there?

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    I think it looks superb. I love the little windy streets, the small courtyards, the little neighbourhoods; the whole thing just feels right.

    Just one question though: In the lake you have what looks like a half submerged jetty in the top left...is that what it's meant to be?

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