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    Guild Artisan Facebook Connected Rythal's Avatar
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    Yup, looks like a good start. A few things that stand out to me, mostly from an Aesthetic point of view:

    - The continental shelf: seems very out of place with the rest of the ocean. I think if you blended the edge of the shelf with the sea, it would flow a bit better (no pun intended)

    -Mountains : could do with some more definition, particularly the peaks

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    @Rythal: I usually would have more definition in the mountains, but I decided to soften them up while I was doing the 'aging' of the map in hopes that it looked like it has been on the wall of some guild or magistrate's office and has seen some better years. And I agree on the shelf. My original intention was for it to pop the continent off the page a little more, but I do think in retrospect that it is a little too harsh on the edges.
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