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    hmm, the first thing I have to ask is about the elven lands; are they desert or forest? it would be very odd for a desert to be on nearly the same latitude as the arctic (glacirnum). Otherwise, A more "boreal" type of colours would probably communicate the type of region that is a bit better.

    secondly, I would suggest blurring the edges of the regions as a start, to indicate transition zones between ecozones. Also, maybe make the mountains in rutilem a bit darker; they are somewhat hard to see.

    hope that helps somewhat, you have no river violations as far as I can see, so most of the stuff is aesthetic.

    Oh, and gratz on your first post!
    Last edited by Rythal; 10-11-2010 at 12:04 AM.

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