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    Octopod was the original author, but he hasn't been seen in these parts for almost two years now.

    I think you could tone down the blue a bit. It's quite vibrant in comparison to most of the other features. Also, there is no indication of the mountains here, although you've labeled the passes. (The Heriyat Pass, by the way, runs east-west and is fairly short. You've got it running north-south parallel to the mountain range.) And Plaguefort is misspelled.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Midgardsormr View Post
    Octopod was the original author, but he hasn't been seen in these parts for almost two years now.

    I think you could tone down the blue a bit. It's quite vibrant in comparison to most of the other features. Also, there is no indication of the mountains here, although you've labeled the passes. (The Heriyat Pass, by the way, runs east-west and is fairly short. You've got it running north-south parallel to the mountain range.) And Plaguefort is misspelled.
    Good Points. I'll make the suggested changes..Thanks
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