Very nice indeed, especially for a first go. To be honest, improving it in it's current state is just small things. From I can see maybe modify the labeling a bit, for instance "avelburh" in my mind doesn't convey clearly what it's labeling and is placed at an odd location. Also the title is proportionally too small. Again small adjustments to add more mood more lighting/shadow effects, smoke from chimneys etc etc. There's always the WIP section if you wanna have a go at a round of critique there.

P.S. Repped!