Looks really nice, man.
Looks really nice, man.
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That map looks great, nice job on the coloring and the transparency. If I was going to give you any criticism I'd say to take the stroke off the text, darken it just a bit and keep the glow around it. Maybe keep the stroke on the light colored call outs. As it is the stroke creates a kind of blur effect on the text making it harder to read.
Best of luck!
I'm entering RE, just trying to have something substantially completed before I post it.
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Ascension - I appreciate it. Will you be entering this year?
jtougas - that's a shame, I always love seeing what you come up with!
DevinNight - Thanks for the advice! Is this version any better?
gaemon - I'd love to see a WIP though! No need to be shy!
I just noticed that the image has a higher contrast and grittiness in the thumbnail that I kind of prefer... Hm.
Last edited by RecklessEnthusiasm; 03-21-2011 at 06:13 PM.
in my opinion, much better. nice job.
That looks great.
(But you have a typo in encounter 3, it should be "indeed dynamite".)
Like the graffiti touch!
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fix speelin
6. ..... Landing atop the it's back..
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fix... remove "the"
6. ..... Landing atop the it's back..
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4. Two "r"s in "barrels". "Well-placed" and "indeed" have also suffered letter pilferage. Dang goblins!
5. The goblins would "poke" their heads out to take a "peek".
6. As already noted, remove the "the" in "the its back". It barks? Really? I guess the goblins have truly domesticated it.
9. To keep tense consistent change "catched" (which would be "caught" anyway) to "catches". It should be a comma rather than a period after "Pleeeze"
10. "Alerted" - Well, we found one of those missing letters, anyway. Huzzah! Cave sharks!