hey, welcome to the forum! i really like your idea with the paper, thats pretty clever. this map is pretty cool, i used to draw hand maps like that for D&D a lot back in my second edition days lol. the only real suggestion i have would be to use more colors, maybe some browns and greens inbetween the forests, or maybe actually patchwork the land into farms, though it looks like a very large place, so that might not work so well.