February Entry: The Old Tower

[ravells]

mmm I think it looked better before!

[terrainmonkey]

yeah, i'm with revells, there's really no reason for the folds and creases. it really doesn't add anything to the piece. but why i'm tell you this i don't know because it cannot possible profit me.

good looking maps BTW.

[NeonKnight]

Hmmmm.....I think you may be right. Without the Folds is definitely better. I'll fix it up later tonight.

[alucard339]

Nice looking job neo,
But for my part, I would keep the fold on the letter and not on the maps, cause most of the time we try to keep the map intact, but we always fold or notes in the book to make sure we don’t lose it.

In any case, it’s just my own opinion.

[pyrandon]

Great job, Neon. I think the folds would look fine except the grey/white portion is too pronounced (I had this same criticism of the original in the tutorial); I say tone that down and keep it!

[NeonKnight]

OK, SO I removed the folds from the Maps, and changed them up a bit on the letter of Charter. I also added some shadow effects to the items on the desks, and added a few other items to the desk.

Otherwise, I am done.

[alucard339]

Now that's a great looking desk.

It's great because it's simple and it has a feeling of reality. It's a room the players would like to stumble on and search.

Good work neo and maybe I'll worknap your month challenge: if like last week I add to improvise a small side quest since 2 of my 4 players were missing.

Sea u a-round,
Alu.