Quote Originally Posted by ravells View Post
(personally I think Johnn Four's newletter is the best example of it - that man deserves some sort of medal).
Hear hear!

I agree that indented paragraphs would be easier for me to read, particularly in the fiction piece, where the leading between paragraphs was only slightly larger than that between lines.

As concerns giving the zine a "center:" I think if the Alliance does more collaborative challenges, those could be used to build some synergy between the articles. That might cause each issue to hang together a little better.

I don't know how much work the shared challenges are to set up, though.

I haven't actually finished the entire zine yet--I got distracted and haven't gone back to it yet. I may have further comments later.