Greenwall Redux

[Publius]

I like it. You've done a nice job with the layout of the streets and such, it is compact, but that is certainly no sin in a setting where you have castles and walls and nasty things outside that want to get inside.

This is not so much a critique as a question: do you want to make some of the buildings inside of the walls connected to one another? The reason that I say this is that you do find some buildings made in that fashion in this style of map, pushed rather tightly against one another. It diesn;t have to be all either, in fact better if it is not IMHO.

[rwaluchow]

Once again, thanks for the input.

I utilized some of your advise and now have an inked copy of the map.

I'll post again once I have it coloured.

cheers,

Rwaluchow

[Badger]

Looks good... are you inking it by hand with regular pens or rapidograph like pens?

[rwaluchow]

I inked it by hand with a technical pen.

[rwaluchow]

Okay, here is the coloured version.

Snag away, and thanks for the help.

Rwaluchow

[ravells]

Gorgeous! Lovely inking!

[rwaluchow]

Thank you,

I think my enthusiasm over my first map on this site led to some hasty inking, but my further posts will surely improve.

As long as I receive this honest and helpful feedback, I'm sure to improve my skills (which IS why I'm here); thank you to everybody who has responded.

[Badger]

You used color ink as well? I know that seems like a stupid question, but I was making sure you didn't photoshop it after you inked it... if so, where do you get your inks for your tech pens? I love the colors

[rwaluchow]

No, the colour was all done in photoshop. I just inked the pencil drawing with a black staedtler pigment liner; nothing fancy.