Though i agree that it is a little "orderly..." If the roads and ground work were laid out ahead of time, then it makes sense that it would sprout up just as planned in the richer districts.

I would add a sort of "Shanty town" area that would be a little more hecticly laid out.

I like the island in the middle alot though. There seems to be a rather large temple next to the grave yard.

I just like the fact that I would assume those are drawbridges, and the instance of the temple there might mean the grave yard has the tendancy to "come alive", when this happens the drawbridges are pulled up and the inhabitiants of the temple help to keep them in line.

Perhaps an event that happens once a year, or whenever there is a lunar eclipse?

Anyway I like it and i'm looking forward to seeing it in color.

I'm giving you some rep for making something that sprwals across 2 pages