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    Wip WIP: Shalbaan

    I'm new to the forum and new to mapmaking, so hello! I wanted to share a WIP of my first "real" city map, and ask for feedback and opinions.

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    Most of the buildings you see are just basic shapes from an older draft; I'm hoping to redo most of the buildings so that they look a bit nicer (see lower right corner)...

    My main problem at the moment is the "window pane" on the left, which is meant to show an underground view of the cave complex beneath the city (a Dwarven district, of sorts). Rather than appearing flat, the image inside the pane appears to be bending or folding over onto itself (some trick of the eye involving perspective). I have no real artistic training, so I'm not sure how to correct this and would appreciate feedback. Maybe it's a problem that will correct itself as I populate that area with more features..

    Thanks for any advice or critique people want to share.
    Last edited by saltyfish; 06-10-2016 at 04:38 PM.

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