I like the Rob-Style map a lot better. I always felt that darkling's style is not really suited for larger area maps... the way the forests turn out make it too nervous in my eyes.

But I think the new map worked out quite well. Perhaps you should consider making it a little larger again, and reduce the relative size of some of your labels. Right now, your map is rather buried in text. Especially your rivers are drowned under the weight of their names.

Also you might consider to flip the label for the Goblin's Teeth. Vertical text is always difficult to read, but I'd say the other way round would be an improvement.