Untitled map for tutorial

[silverhead]

Hi there,

I didn't plan to do much with the last map I posted in this thread, but as I had a few ideas for a setting and no map, I decided to apply them.

Here's a small portion of the map, with a lot of names. The little ones in italic are supposed to be the tribes inhabiting those lands, in resemblance of pre-roman maps of Gallaecia that I've seen (like this one). I've tried to follow Diamond's advice about using non-fancy fonts, and using small sizes with space between letters to fill greater surfaces. What do you think?

I'm quite happy with how it's shaping up, but it's lacking something. Maybe some drawing, or something else that's been hand-drawn. I'll have to look for maps in similar styles to see how they're done.

But for now, critiques and comments are, as usual, welcome. Thanks in advance.